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APP writing standards file: Joe (Year 1 secure level 1)

Joe's attainment across writing

Overall level AF5AF6AF3AF4AF1AF2AF7AF8HWP
Secure 1
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  • Introduction

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at secure level 1, includes evidence from a recount set by the teacher to practise using full stops. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Story: Once Upon a Time There Was a Flower

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at secure level 1, includes evidence from a story that was inspired by research. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Diary: plant growth

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at secure level 1, includes evidence from illustrated observations for a class project on living things. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Making a spider

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at secure level 1, includes evidence from collective writing about using a construction kit with friends. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Information page on spiders

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at secure level 1, includes evidence from ideas collected during research and listed with the teacher's support. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Assessment summary

    This assessment summary of a Year 1 child, assessed at secure level 1, shows how he progressed over the year against AFs 1––8. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Making a level judgement

    This assessment summary of a Year 1 child shows how writing assessment guidelines were used to determine that he was working at secure level 1. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Next steps

    These methods to improve the writing skills of a Year 1 child, assessed at secure level 1, include using a phonics programme and developing sentence structure. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).