Reading own recount to whole class
This first piece of evidence shows Daniel reading his own personally created text to the whole class. Daniel wrote this piece unaided, after the May holiday, in the child-initiated writing area.
There are two pages of hand-written work. Page one reads �Today I am going to Brook house. I have got my manchester united cit and we are going to the pub to play. Football and we are going to bring the preyaleag ball. As well as that we are going to bring the goaly gluvs and brad is going to play to. Brook is going to wair a manchester united cit to. Me and brook are going to be on I team because we are wairing the saim cit. as well as that we are in the saim class.
- Daniel's reading was stilted and nervous, lacking fluency and expression, although he paused at full stops. His hands often covered his mouth, making audibility difficult (AF1 L1 b3).
- Discussed his own language choices, e.g. 'premyaleag' (premier league). Also explained that he'd used 'As well as that' as a sentence opener because it was a good way of adding another piece of information (AF5 L2 b1).