Julia's attainment across writing
| Overall level | AF5 | AF6 | AF3 | AF4 | AF1 | AF2 | AF7 | AF8 | HWP |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Low 2 | L2 | L2 | L2 | L1 | L2 | L1 | L2 | L1 | L1 |
Introduction
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from a description written following class work about pirates. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Notes, jottings and more extended independent writing: end of spring term
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from an illustrated play script written following a drama activity. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Diary
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from a diary entry written in the character of Cinderella. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Character sketch
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from a diary entry written in the character of Cinderella. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Story ending and storyboard
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from sequencing a story ending after hotseating some of the characters. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Notes from a unit of work on writing recounts: summer term
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from notes made against photographs arranged on a time line. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Narrative writing: The Amazing Pebble – end of summer term
This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at low level 2, includes evidence from a story written as part of a formal assessment. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Assessment summary
This assessment summary of a Year 1 child, assessed at low level 2, shows how she progressed over the year against AFs 1–8. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
Next steps
These methods to improve the writing skills of a Year 1 child, assessed at low level 2, include reading her work aloud and expanding punctuation use. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).
