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APP writing standards file: James (Year 1 high level 2)

James's attainment across writing

Overall level AF5AF6AF3AF4AF1AF2AF7AF8HWP
High 2
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  • Introduction

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes evidence from a story written in response to a stimulus and class discussion. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Instructional writing: How to make a cheese sandwich

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes evidence from a set of instructions linked to science and design and technology. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Writing a recount based on 'Tobias and the Angel'

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes evidence from a story based on a painting, created in pairs. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Narrative writing: A Walk in the Woods

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes evidence from a story based on a Key Stage 1 writing task. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Visit to Middlesbrough Institute of Modern Art (MIMA)

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes a recount of a visit to a gallery after class discussion. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • My house

    This annotated example of a Year 1 child’s work, assessed at high level 2, includes a description of his house written to persuade a potential buyer. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Assessment summary

    This assessment summary of a Year 1 child, assessed at high level 2, shows how he progressed over the year against AFs 1–8. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Making a level judgement

    This assessment summary of a Year 1 child shows how writing assessment guidelines were used to determine that he was working at high level 2. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).

  • Next steps

    These methods to improve the writing skills of a Year 1 child, assessed at high level 2, include using individual conferences and guided writing. This is part of a writing standards file that you can use to make your own judgements in Assessing Pupils’ Progress (APP).